The Wait…

Posted: September 4, 2012 in Flash Fiction, Stories
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She dashed into the hall to grab the front seat.

His independent movie was acclaimed by critics. She knew he would be here today. If he won, she could even hear him – his acceptance speech! She hadn’t seen or heard him in past seven years. He was an aspiring director then.

“One of the nominated directors.” whispered someone sitting next to her, pointing at the door.

She looked out with a throbbing heart.

There HE was! Charming as ever!

He walked in. His right arm around a beautiful woman; His left hand held a little one to his chest!



My First attempt at Flash fiction – less than 100 words!!! Comments and criticisms are welcome!!!



  1. Ow, so full of suspense and nicely written. I am not sure who the little one is though, perhaps, a child. Great story in the making. Please where is your follow botton?

  2. surindernath says:

    Very creative, impressionable and satisfying in its genre.

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